[FeedBack] Low-poly Grocery store

is it good when I wanna tell you that my low poly grocery store good?
this is the id game u need to see.

why I m not posting a picture?
I do not take a picture because my computer takes a bad photo of it like soo…blurry, and kinda mess.

how you understand.

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i like it, very nice glass effect.
i recommend that you add “bricks” to the store walls, and try to try to stay away from decals.

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Hello im @TMG_ALT and here is my feedback first off instad of this being a decal make it 3d


The back needs some low-poly bricks ngl its kinda blank

The 2nd one also needs something to spice it up and make unique from the 1st

Also this just looks like it needs fixing

Anyway that was my feedback hope this helped! :smiley:

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Hi @RISING_ROBLOX, I really like your build but didn’t want to leave you without anything to reconsider - so here are a few small things that I would have done differently:

  • Scale: The windows on one of your buildings seemed slightly too high for a Roblox character to see through comfortably, and the door on the other building seemed a little too narrow for my character’s body.

  • Consistency: The windows and doors on each building are different shades of blue for example, which makes them look out of place alongside one another. The buildings are also very different, with one being a fairly bright green whilst the other is a more subtle red colour.

  • Texture: The buildings are fairly flat and bland at their rear, so adding other details may make them much more appealing from all angles. Consider looking at other low poly work if you need some inspiration.

I hope this feedback helps, and please let me know if you make any changes as I’d love to see them!

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I like it, great job. Maybe add a dumpster behind the buildings.

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I will do it soon :+1: :smiley: