[Feedback] My first Build. Currently how much would this be worth for a commission?

[RedFury5667]

Hi!

Just recently I just started building in Roblox just for fun and been doing pretty well I think. I tried to make a high quality low poly build as my first build.

It would be really great to receive feedbacks on how I could improve my current builds as well as to know how much would this build cost if it were a commission because I was planning in doing it in the future.

[Being_Built]

I’ve been building on roblox for around 6 years so i’m a little experienced haha.

I’ll get straight to the point.

Pros:

• Colour is very vibrant and you’ve aimed for a child’s bedroom which works perfectly
• The use of the lower wall is very smart and add’s substance
• Block style is certainly unique as not a lot of people build like that these days but it still cool
• Textures are well used

Improvements:

• Don’t use free models especially if you a trying to sell a build (deprecates the price or the client will be unhappy with the usage of free models)
• Scale is off, it looks like you built quite large which is fine but the bed is too small in comparison to the desk and other features just aren’t quite to scale
• Add more variation to the models like less blocks and maybe a larger feature like a plastic slide especially if it’s a child’s bedroom

But looks quite good for a first build, don’t take offence to any of the feedback it’s just there to help with some guidance for your next build that will be even better!

Price: It’s unlikely someone would pay for it if it uses free models and it’s not a complex build as it’s just a bedroom. If you owned all the models I believe you might be able to sell it to someone for up to 1000 robux. Then again depends on how long it took and also who you are selling it too.

I hope this helped and best of luck for your future builds!

EDIT: LEARN HOW TO USE BLENDER trust me it’s a life saver

[RedFury5667]

Thank you for the feedback. I just noticed the desk is really off. I really didn’t used any free models. I also kinda made it in about 3 days.