Hello there,
This is one of my first builds its a cafe.
The machines are Free Models, but the building I made
Please let me know what you think.
Thanks!
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Your buildings looks pretty good. I’d recommend adding some sort of roof instead of what you have, where the roof is flat. Here’s a cool example I actually found from online for the roof:
Probably would do well with a logo too rather than a 3D Text Model that you have, “The Café.” Something else I found, you could probably add a sign sticking out of one of the walls to show the name of the Café:
I’d also recommend adding awnings over the windows, here’s a reference image for what I mean in this picture:
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Okay, thanks for the feedback!
As @TedArthur mentioned, if you don’t want a roof, try adding a balcony where you can sit and relax while drinking your sweet coffee. Very yummy!
BUT there are a few things i wanna point out.
As i can see in your 7th photo, the upper side of the room is kinda empty. Why don’t you add some posters or some shelters. (my opinion can be different from yours)
I love the architecture you’ve put into it but there can still be things added outside so it doesnt look so empty, if y’know what i mean.
The door design is pretty good as long as its not a sliding / self sliding door.
Overall, your Cafe looks seriously amazing so far. Keep the good stuff coming and never give up!
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Personally, i think that the cafe needs tables and chairs. It also needs to have textures on the floor to fit the cafe theme as wood planks aren’t really cafe themed. I’d also recommend expanding the cafe by either adding a 2nd floor or just expanding it by width. I’d also recommend adding decorations to it to attract people to the game. It’s a pretty good start to a cafe it just needs it’s final touches and some changes. Overall an amazing job. Keep up the good work!
Remember, that is his first building. He wanted to have a feedback before going into a point when there is no return or a very hard way back.
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Yeah I see what you mean, I will add something to the wall
Thanks
Yeah just realising that it looks really empty gonna add some tables and stuff.
Thanks
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Oh and also, try to create your own Logo for the Cafe. Trust me, a good and satisfying logo will strike the view of anybody. You can get some inspiration from Google Images, as a gentle start.
Good Idea, I’m not too good at logo design so should I hire someone?
If you have robux to pay him, why not.
But if the logo you took is quite simple, try to put it as a decal on a part, scale that part and make a 3D model of the logo OVER that part. That’s how i did most of my logos.