Feedback needed for my first game

Hi, I’m not sure if this is the right place to be posting this, but sometime last year I was curious about how people made their games, so I decided to try to make my own one little chunk at a time.

So basically I used to play a game where you picked up cool items and could buy upgrades to get insanely high amounts of money, so I decided I would try something like that. You pretty much just run around collecting items to upgrade your multiplier. This helps later when you want to rebirth. There are also some other things you can buy like trails which will increase speed and jump height and server luck which will cause rarer items to spawn!

I decided to post this as I am getting near finishing it after close to 5 months of development. Being a simulator, the game will definitely turn some away, but if anyone is willing to look at it and give some feedback on GUI, building, or something else that would be great!

Game link: Rebirth Simulator

Alright, so I’ve played it and here’s what I think:

To be fair, I’ve never really liked simulators, so sorry if this review comes off harsh.

The GUIs are rather basic, and maybe could get a bit of an improvement (e.g. more rounded corners, a better and more consistent colour palette, more padding between the edges, etc). The map is your run-of-the-mill cartoony, low poly, simulator map, which is fine, but it’s overdone and therefore is kind of boring. If we’re talking success, your game might struggle in the long term due to the amount of other simulators in the market, that may have had a foothold for months, even years. I would say maybe add something that makes it stand out from others, because right now, it’s nothing special. You’ll need to make some improvements, and think outside the box in terms of features if you wanna ever get big on Roblox.

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