Feedback needed on NEW cartoon OBBY

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Although this has a lot of free modules. I’m still very proud of myself!

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I have checked your obby and in my opinion it looks pretty good.

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Thanks! :smiley:I’m glad you like it!

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Here is my opinion:
Just a generic, boring obby.

Why?
Well, I am going to tell you some reasons:

  1. The thumbnail’s quality is pretty bad.
  2. Why does the Like & Follow button have another light blue rectangle behind it (it’s not made for a stroke, only two sides of the button were on the light blue rectangle.
  3. You said you used a lot of free models but there is barely anything in the obby, so I assume you meant “I didn’t put a single hour into making a obby and made free models do the job for me” considering all I see is free modeled houses and probably a obby that wasn’t original and is a free model.

Conclusion:
It is a unoriginal, full of free models generic obby.

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Ok, so. Like and follow button is unnecessary, just put it in description. The obby is very very generic. Looks good, but it gets boring over time.

I am also developing an Obby, which is my first ever game on roblox. I am planning to make it as amazing as possible, already 80% done with it, it took me almost 3 weeks to reach 80% because I’m trying to make it as perfect as possible.

What I’m trying to say is, it looks like as if you didn’t put much effort in it. It’s cartoony, but the stages are repeated but just a little bit changed.

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Your game is ok, it’s your average only. Try to make your own assets

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I made the obby, but the desgn, aka like around the obby, that’s the free modules.

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Could you please post some images? My wifi is pretty slow to play Roblox :rofl:

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Hmm I see where your heading. :slight_smile:

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I just tried your game and it seems like it has a virus.

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I don’t like it. Why is the character a noob? You have also used a lot of free models which is bad as they could contain a virus like @Aiden_12114 said. The weird looking noob with the fire just doesn’t make any sense and looks like the whole thing was made in maybe 30 minutes? What is the point of the like and follow button? It doesn’t do anything and what are you supposed to follow to lol! I’m assuming basically everything I just played is a free model right? The trees are free modeled, judging on the fact you use free models I would say the fence is also free modelled and the houses are probably all free modelled as well not to mention the end with the rewards.

Conclusion : To make a good obby, you shouldn’t ever use any free models and should put time and effort into making it good.

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It looks good but it has a lot of free models and the game contains a virus. Also in one of your other posts, you mentioned that you been building for 3 years but from the looks of this obby. It doesn’t look like it.

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hmm. I’l lfix that! :slight_smile:

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My intent is not to dishearten you, I will just be giving constructive criticism

First off, the obby is flat out just plain. It does not really appeal to the player. Also i would recommended NOT using free models, unless crediting the original creators.
below is a list of things that should be changed:

  • R15 is bad for obby games, unless you make a suitable custom animation.
  • Change the scenery, nobody likes looking at an empty baseplate. You could separate the map with fences which adds points for looks.
  • The ui that says Like and follow either make it look better or flat out just delete it. It looks pretty meh and low effort
  • The stages are very very basic make them even a little better if you can
  • The thumbnail game icon whatever looks like you took a screenshot and added text in ms paint.

TLDR;
Dont use free model, everything has lots of room for improvement.

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overall Bad, full of free models, it’s too simple, like… 1 block, probably you made it under 1 hour, i’d put more work into your game

edit: i forgot to say about the gui and the thumbnail
the thumbnail is really low graphic and the gui saying to like and follow is just bad

edit 2: and it’s unoriginal and generic, Obby’s are basically a Get Money now-a-days

my rate : 3/10

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Right when I joined it instantly tried to teleport me to another game but it said it was restricted. It changed my skin color to yellow and put a certain animation on me. (Which I’m pretty sure was another virus). So please try harder next time because your game will get infected.

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5 Suggestions:
-Don’t use free models because I believe the whole thing is one, they could contain viruses
-Add music to the game for better experience
-Hire someone or make UI to add to the game
-Consider making something by yourself not taking someone’s models that took 20 minutes to make and finally make the game playable on all devices. I tried it on my phone and the Follow and Like button was on my screen covering a bit more than the chat UI

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I made it in a day. not 1 hour-

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No.I make the skin and animation. It’s supposed to happen.

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It really doesn’t look like a day of work, the only thing you really did was make the obby and the ground. Everything else was free models.