Hi everybody.
Constructive criticism and feedback required on this
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Could you give more camera angles?
I do not know if you already have done so but could you add a gradient of green. For example, A darker green to lighter green to give a diverse look.
Other then that the view is amazing 
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unfortunately, I am not at my computer. There is, however, another shade of green!.
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Analysis
It looks absolutely incredible. The terrain, especially.
Constructive Criticism/Feedback
One could add more color to what appears to be an vehicle designed for flight and the hangar it rests in. Though if you are going for a monochrome color scheme, that’s fine with me. The turrets on the vehicle could use some depth.
For example, The Super Capital Cannon from Galaxy by rcouret.
In my opinion, the hangar is too organised. Humans are often messy, unless they are literally perfect; therefore, there should be some things that are not perfectly aligned. Maybe add some boxes or crates.
Judging by the height of the mountains, I believe there should be some snow on the top of them.
Conclusion
As I said before, it looks amazing. Keep up the great work!
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It looks incredibly good! It’s very cohesive, especially things that you have in the distance. Do you use heightmaps to accomplish the look with your mountains?
I use fog to place the terrain in such a way it looks immersive, its so far away and so blurred that you cant tell that multiple meshes are being reused.
However, roblox limitations make it so you can clearly see a color conflict near the horizon,.
Im going to use multiple shades of grey, i like keeping a monochrome setup, its simple and not overly complicated.
Could you suggest any way to make the hanger look messy?, Thanks for the input so far
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If you want to improve you will firstly have to learn how to use colours more effectively, even if just using just a few more subtle colours to add to all of the greys used.
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Im all ears to any ideas you may have. Colors have never been my strong area of development and I would love to see how you would have done it.