Greetings developers,
Hello! I am a new developer and this is the first game that I’ve ever made. I am looking for some feedback on it. Thanks!
Floating-Restaurant-Tycoon
I invested about 50000R in advertising
However, the result was not satisfactory.
Players lost severely in the first 10 minutes and could not find the direction of optimization.
The builds are very colorful and eyecatching, the music is quite nice, it definitely appeals to kids. The game UI is really lacking though. Grammar mistakes, bad contrast with colors, ugly icons, and one bit of the text is black and one is white with a black stroke. They also appear to be complete different fonts adjacent to eachother.
If you need help with creating UI, I do take UI commissions. 
I believe there is definitely major things that can be improved on in the key gameplay loops. Further refinement and introduction of elements that increase replayability will help to improve player retention and interest in the game. Also keep in mind to add unique and interesting elements, think about who your target audience may be and design your game to appeal to them.
^ I can agree with this.
Also in your description the tags; in my opinion you shouldn’t put those tags down there when are already running 50k in ads as they are a eyesore and to me looked down upon.
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