Feedback On 2nd 2d Art

Some parts of the image haven’t been smoothed out yet because I was a little tired to but…
Feedback is appreciated!


I’m sorry if my shading is bad too
Anything I should add? The tail looks a little odd as well.

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I would suggest using black for the outlines (and a thinner brush). You could also use an eraser to make the ends of certain lines sharper. Also, it doesn’t really look like there is much shading at all. I would make the shadows darker where they should be.

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I like the art itself, but I think you should make her focus on something specific, instead of her staring into space.

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