Feedback on a Cinematic

:wave: Hey, I decided to make a cinematic on an exoplanet, what do you think of it? I’d love to hear your opinions and what I should improve & add on to it.

Please note that this is the result of around 1-2 days of work.

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0:25 - 0:36 - Maybe add some sounds like fire/smoke outside kinda relating to how you did when you were near the crash.

Also this is very cool, love the flashlight, head movement, and lighting in general.

Any way for the beginning intro you could have them view outside a window (like the ship) instead of just that like smoke and stuff, but honestly love the music and crash itself!

Great job.

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Sick Cutscene! I really like the effects too :+1: It’d be cool if you could be inside the ship and see it crashing.

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Thanks for the feedback, and yes, I was thinking of adding a window view from the ship crashing because it gives a more immersive experience.