Hello Builders!
So recently, I’ve made a small showcase of a map and i wanted some feedback from you guys to tell me what should i improve. Here’s the game’s link:
And here’s some screenshots:
I hope you liked this.
This was my first post, and all of the models are made by me except for the 3D text that i used it for the game icon.
Damn, this looks cute and the lighting is on point, so clean, so sharp and so pristine. I was wondering if you could share your lighting settings.
Thanks, i appreciate it. And here is the lighting’s properties:
I also added “ColorCorrection” and “SunRays” effects to the game.
The Lighting and the Layout looks fantastic.
However, i feel like the building, specifically the platforms, is lacking.
Each hill is either one cylinder or one part (The dirt). Try adding multiple mixed together and you should see major improvement. Same goes for the grass on the hills, try adding bumps to them, and irregular shapes. You wouldn’t see a perfectly round bush, or a perfect cylinder hill in real life would you?
Hope this helped 
Its is really good but i think it needs more details and shapes
I see your point there… Seeing a terrain like this is Not realistic comparing to the real life environment.
To be honest, it wasn’t meant to be like a real life terrain or environment.
It was mostly inspired from a title that was a huge part of my childhood which was “Paper Jam” an RPG game that had an unusual terrain or “platforms” as you said.
And for the bushes, i will remake another model more realistic as you said before. Just like the trees lol.
I will take care of your advices if i made a realistic environment. Thanks for the feedback!
Everything in this picture looks fantastic and wonderful!
I like the nature, vegetation, and the landscape for both of the tall islands in the pictures as they look very well built and the lighting is well made as well. 
Overall, great build and lighting choice but could use some skies/clouds in there, nice work! 
Thanks for the feedback!
I will do my best to improve my skills at building, and I will probably change the sky later, Thanks again!
Also one thing. If you really want to improve it, massively, try using custom textures. The sand and slate texture have been overused in roblox builds and look odd. Not really blaming them because heck they’re old, but take advantage of new textures.
Decent job.
A little more detail wouldn’t hurt. You could add some more decor to the floor, maybe some cool designs of variety of mountain shapes it would look more improved if you included different sizes, shapes, height formation so they don’t look repetitive in a way, consider placing some variation in the trees have different branches and change up the formation of the leaves.
I think instead of havin Identical objects mainly focused on the bushes and what I’m assuming are rocks try creating another patch so they can at least have variation implemented into them.
I’m liking what you made in particular it looks amazing.
Understandable, i admit that the sand texture is Overused. Sand every where… So overused!
I never really used custom textures for my creations, but i will use them for sure, Thanks for the help!
Exposed! It is true that they are easy to notice.
For the decorations, am trying to make unusual shapes in blender (Such as Rocks) and also make various detailed models avoiding repetitive Models. The trees have complexe shapes, so it gonna take me sometime to make a good one just like the bushes.
Thank you so much for your feedback!
Lighting is spot on, I do not know if you are going for a blocky design, but you absolutely nailed it! Keep up the awesomness!
Thank you!
To be honest, i didn’t already chosen a build style (like a low poly style for exemple). I try to specialize myself on everything, Thanks again!
Looks really nice, but I believe you should make the skies darker, and add more fog.
Yooo, this is sick, would look awesome as a FPS map.
Looks really nice, I like your style of trees, bushes and hills, they look good together!
Woah gg bro. However, I do agree with @IocaIe. Looks really neat, but the circular platforms could use some more bushy detail. Other than that, amazing job man! Keep it up.
I really like your style. The way you detailed the shapres are very cool.
I really like this. Nice job! If you remove the snowy or the grassy island, it really could do for a Arsenal map!
