So I and my friend went got into a game jam and made a game! The theme was ‘Mind control’! I have nothing more to say here is the game I need feedback on it: (15) Subject 36-A [READ DESCRIPTION IF YOU ARE STUCK] - Roblox
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So I wrote down some notes:
- Camera moves too much when looking around
- Odd flickering with the lighting at times
- Damage overlay when I return to my character
- Possible to get boxes stuck in a corner, which would cover the codes (almost)
- I can reach levers from any range
- Text at the end isn’t visible when screen is stuck on black (I assume this is the end)
Overall, I think the concept is pretty interesting. The game plays well, although I wish the pushing of blocks was a little bit easier (not a big deal). I’d love to see this fleshed out in some way. Either more complex puzzles with unique abilities (either from the player or the mind controlled NPCs). It would be interesting to see the story expanded as well. Maybe instead of just puzzles, it’s a combination of that and stealth, where your goal is to escape and you learn things along the way. Perhaps you can gain information from mind controlling in some way. Just some suggestions. But great game, especially for only 24 hours. 
well, thank you for your review! (also idk wth is going on with the lighting it wasn’t doing that yesterday) But yea I know for these issues I didn’t have time to finish the ending lol (i summited the game 1 minute before the deadline lol) and yea I might continue it after the game jam and I’ll probably add more things and more complex mechanics after! Thank you!
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This is one of the Coolest Games I’ve played in a while! It’s not over complicated and super fun. 9/10 Very Cool game and for 24 hours? Insanely Well put together
The game has a really unique concept and with polishing I can see it bringing in revenue. If you continue to expand on this project, here are some things to think of:
- How it can be expanded to multiplayer
- I’ll write more when I think of it, oops.
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i really like this game its verry creative
@TheRealMrSquirrel @BullfrogBait @arne507 Thank you for your review! It seems that people think that it’s a good game so I’ll probably continue it after the game jam ends! Also for the multiplayer, I’ve thought of something: Okay so the game plays in 4 or 2 and basically when you join the game with other people you can pick a power like mind control or telepathy of hacking… well you understand the point and each person has things to do in the puzzle to be able to complete it, taught there something I don’t know how to do how would I be able to make the player come back in the game after they finish it?
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That sounds awesome I cant wait to play it! 
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Thank you a lot! (also i hope to win the game jam lol)
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I also hope you win i did’nt see the other games but your game is very creative and fun to play. that other idea for multyplayer is also very cool i can’t wait to play it i hope its gonna be a succesful game with a lot of players
sadly i didn’t win lol but thank you!