This is the second map I’ve ever tried on and this game is a club type game with a bit of simulator thrown in. This map is not finished and the UI is just the bare bones so don’t mind it. I don’t care if you are rude, just give me the best feedback you can. I am the only one building this game but there will be another builder soon. Thank you!
https://www.roblox.com/games/5075427671/Club-Sage-A-simulator-that-is-not-finished
Hi! The over all game looks great, but here are a few things I noticed…
The outside of the map is very good and detailed but the club its self is very empty and the attention to detail is very minimal. There are not vert many things to do and the UI is broken. I would suggest adding some more things like, seating, interactive lighting (Things like Stage Lights, Dance Floor). Another thing I would suggest is fixing the lighting. It is very dark in the main club its self with barley any lights coming from the support poles. I would still consider the game in Early Development stages and not have it open to the public yet as most necessary features to the game are not yet working or implemented.
The over all outside map build is good. I like the attention to detail on the road and pathways. The only thing that needs major improvement is the club. As a single builder the work so far is good but I would suggest taking your time on an item. For example, You are making a DJ Booth. You can Build the frame, then build the walls around it, then build the table for it. The key is Time and the more time you put on it the better the result will be. Please do not take anything I said as Rude, I am just trying to help!
Have a nice day!
No need to apologize for being rude, I don’t even see this as rude in the smallest bit. I see this as constructive criticism and I appreciate it. I know that the club is empty and that is being that I am still working on the game but I will take use the feedback of the booth part and the lighting part. I’ve been looking around the forums for lighting tips and I have not found much. I also know that the GUI is not working, it is just the bare bones and the person that is helping me with the game has made new GUI and some scripts. I really appreciate your input and I will take it to mind.
Thank you,
Giltory
On that red portion you could add some sort of stage lighting system. Not the entire red thing, you get the point. It would help with space and add more light. Just a suggestion.
I’ll try and do that. Do you think the lights should be facing the dj booth or the dance floor.
I would suggest both through and animation.
love the concept of the game, its original! i wish u the best of luck.
Thank you, I appreciate it! I hope you the best as well.
