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ROBLOX GHOSt GFX THUMBNaIL BY ZAYD
ROBLOX GHOSt GFX THUMBNaIL BY ZAYD1280×720 436 KB

So this is basically an ghost in a restaurant o_O
An feedback would be appreciated.

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Not very bad!
If your intention to make the restaurant to make dark I think this is good enough!
but if not just add more light points.

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Thanks for the feedback! Appreciate it. :smiley:

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I reckon this looks really great! I’m getting a spooky vibe from this already, great job! What I suggest is:

  • Maybe make the ghost slightly transparent, that would be cool
  • You could change the pose of the ghost a bit, maybe change their hands a bit, to make them not just be standing still.
  • you could add some decoration to the table, like a table cloth maybe.
  • You could also edit the GFX a bit, add small details like steam coming out of the bowl, that would really make it pop!

Other than that, great job! Keep practicing, and I can’t wait to see more of your GFXs! :heart:

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Thank you so much for the feedback! :smiley:

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If you’re trying to make it more creepy, you could :

  • Turning down the saturation. Gives it a more horror-ish vibe!
  • As, Rainbow_Skies said, change the pose and transparency to make it seem more ghost-like.
  • Also, if the person sitting is seeing the ghost, change his stance to seem more terrified!

Good job and keep up the good work!

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I think this looks like a place I would like to hang out. I do find the white box (thermostat?) on the wall on the left by the guys head a bit distracting.

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