Please give some feedback on my hotel! I am making the counters curved to make it looks better FYI
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To be honest I’ve never seen an hotel like that and I actually think its cool. One thing I’d work on though are the buildings designs. I’m not much of a builder/designer but I would give them a better color/material that makes them stand out a bit more. Most of the map seems to be kinda grey but other than that I’d say its pretty decent.
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I think you could use some lights for the ceiling, more palm trees in different size on the beach would be a good idea, some bushes and flower at the front of the hotel, maybe consider making a modern roof, I recommend using different material too. Other than that it quiet unique.
Mhm just accidently deleted the thing
After getting a better look the front could of the hotel could use some more trees and like Bli_Pan said some bushes and flowers would be nice.
Ok let me try getting the pictures back on the thing
It looks like a great start to a hotel, however, it’s quite a bit plain I would try throwing some color or material on it. Since it’s still in development, there’s isn’t much that could be said at the moment, but I’ll provide some feedback on your build.
I’ll try using certain materials/colors to your build. At the moment it looks pretty plain and simple, however you should try finishing the design up so we can give a lot more feedback on the building instead of giving suggestions because I believe you already planning on adding those bits of detail to your hotel. However maybe add some material on the floor and some pictures and things on the wall could improve it as well.
Most hotels I’ve seen in the real world usually have a lot of warm lighting and use a warmer color palette (try searching a picture on google to get some other ideas to add to the interior and the building itself). I also suggest looking at images of a real hotel so you could get the layout and design right however create what looks good to you. Then, you can try adding a bit of detail here and there one you get started making the rooms overall since the building is not yet finished/ still in progress there isn’t much to go off of.
Anyways, the design of it looks decent.
Ok thanks I will try to use all your feedback in my build! Before you go can you rate this curved counter I just made to make it look nicer? Thanks!
I might make the base abit more bright
imo it needs much more lighting. Maybe use it as hidden cues to lead to certain areas? (i.e. bright lights from the entrance to the reception and then to the rooms while there’s dimmer lights elsewhere)
Guys should I add textures? I already have some but most of them aren’t textures
Okay I will work on the lighting should I add textures and can you see the curved counter above your comment? Can you rate it please? Thanks
Asking for an rating on your build is against the forum rules: However the counter design looks nice I would recommend raising it a bit more so it won’t look too small, maybe try moving the counter back some so it have a more curved shape connecting to the wall part instead of it being rather small I’ll take this image below to see how it looks in the real world.
Oh okay I will move it back! Also sorry I didn’t realize it’s against the rules. Do I get warned? I really hope not I need the forum so bad 
The curved counter doesn’t fit in to the rectangular aesthetic, nor does it provide any info of what the point of interest is for. you probably should find how to do that
also some more stuff:
- your hotel is abit… flat. instead of the lighting suggestion I made earlier, you could place each individual element at different heights
- you should invest abit more into your graphics work. text laid onto something you search up from google images isn’t exactly… great. also consider using surfacegui.lightinfluence to make it look more like a screen
Okay I will work on that! Btw do you know how to make this sign? I think I need some sort of plugin
Looks pretty good! I really like the blue color that you used. I would suggest adding some lighting on the interior for more detail. You could also have it set so that the ceiling does not cast a shadow… this would allow for the interior to appear les dark. To do this open the explorer tab > click the ceiling parts > uncheck cast shadow (explorer tab). I hope this helps. Keep up the great work! 
Thanks for your good feedback just abit upset as somebody was going to pay me for the build until their friend said it was horrible and I lost my job. I really just want to be a builder on the platform. I just want to make robux from the build
I’m so sorry to hear that! Don’t let that bring you down, you just gotta ignore them. I don’t think it’s bad! Just keep practicing and working to get better and better. My top advice would be to not focus on the Robux… Robux are nice but should not be your top priority. You first want to improve as much as you can and get your name out there so as many people as possible know who you are. But most importantly, don’t let them discourage you! Keep building!! 
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I know… But what if I can’t find anybody else? And anyways people only hire people that look rich its 2020 lets be real. If I did sell it what price and what should I improve?