My friends and I have been working on this cafe for a while. It was built for the Orange Vanilla Co. group. We would love some genuine feedback, if you will.
I’ll insert pictures later.
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The Café is overall very low detailed, the majority are models that you took, free models.
I don’t know if you’re being sirious with “for a while”, there are like, uhh, 15 parts…? And the rest are free models.
This is feedback, but my honest feedback.
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Alright, I’ll try to add more detail, along with getting rid of the free models. Thanks for the feedback!
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Np, I din’t mean to hurt you, I’m sorry if I did, but I most likley din’t…?
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i think it was a good start for a good cafe but there was something I wanna show you that a tiny cafe on a tiny island will not be working out.
it is because the cafe it to small simple and also easy to build.
I recommended you make a team of builders, scripters.not only that the building must be big because of the customer around Roblox need to take their time to join which cafe is the best (role play) so… make the place big for a crowd of people plus it needs a great looking food, drinks and other food that was in the menu in your Restaraunt. Before I go, I wanna tell you that the lightning of the game need more progress so that other player can see how gorgeous your place are and also the view of the place are…the skybox needs more improvement.so…
that all for now and I will see you next time…
Seeya!
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It isvery small and its unusual to spawn inside the actual cafe. There is pretty much no terrain, very simple build. and the chairs are fm’ed so change that
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Try to add some trees and maybe use better colors.
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I agree with your statement and she should also add more detail on the outside because it does look very, empty, if you understand?
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Yes, I do agree with you. Thanks for cooperating with me. 
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I agree your cafe needs a lot more details, and you should stop using free models because players won’t play your game, spawn outside of the cafe, I like the music, and there no lag for me.
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I like your café but you could probably add a few more bits to make a better. You could try add some floor plants or posters on the wall to give extra detail. I also really enjoy the music to it. Nice work.
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You didn’t hurt me. I can take the criticism. 
What colors are you thinking of? Our main color pallet was supposed to be orange and white, would you say like, shades of brown would work?
Sure. That’ll be nice. 
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By looking at, the cafe it does looks good at the start, I like the layout it’s a, nice attempt! I would definitely suggest adding some exterior signage to your cafe, so players know exactly what it is, as well as making it look more professional. I would add chairs, tables, signs, some plants to cover the empty parts of the terrain, adding more could make it less empty, try filling it up with a bunch of details. These are just a few things that you could consider adding.
The only thing I would recommend is adding more furniture in the interior. More seats more tables and maybe some indoor plants and the equipment would look nice since the building is completely small however if your keeping it that way definitely add some decorations such as pictures, hanging lights, cafe signs, and many more. I’ll try removing the brick material as it doesn’t seem to match with the build.
I’ll try adding some objects on the roof so it doesn’t look flat and empty. Hope you keep improving.
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Instead of spawning inside of the cafe, add a spawn outside, and add some trees, plants outside to make it look better. Inside, add some plants too. There should be also more furniture inside. The door leading to staff area can be replaced just with a invisible wall, because this one looks really bad. Also, the uniform could be automatically given after passing through the invisible wall, or just door. Overall it’s not bad, it’s half decent.