Feedback on a new obby game me and a friend are working on?

Me and a friend of mine recently started work on a new obby game. Any and all feedback is appreciated, this is one of my first ever obbies and it is quite the fun new challenge to make and develop!


Above is a picture of the first map, known as Lava Lair. This was made by my friend AelfricFenrir with me, and he did a great job on it. Any feedback is, however, greatly appreciated!

Here is an image of a trick tunnel with 2 opposite sides, one allowing you to get through the tunnel safe and alive to a conveyer, the other side immediately killing the player on touch. Does this fit well in the game, or should I remove it? (More terrain, walls, and decorations are being added later on! This is just a start.)

Above is another picture of the obby so far. At the start, those are no normal blocks. They are scripted to disappear, and then reappear every 3-6 seconds, at random times which makes for an interesting challenge! Then, you see the larger block. That, when a player steps on it, disappears slowly until it finally is gone. It will take about 6 seconds to return or restore. This makes for an interesting teamwork opportunity and makes players work together to complete this level.

The full obby and work so far is shown above, this is just the beginning. Any and all recommendations or feedback are greatly appreciated! Thank you for taking your time to read and reply to this, and if enough feedback is given I may post updates! :smiley:

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looks great! please send me the game link so i can try it out if it got released

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Thank you so much! It is not out quite yet, though when stress tests come out, I will be sure to send you the link and let you play! :smiley:

This feedback means a lot, I’ll keep it up! And thank you again! This is an inspiration to me.

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Looks like lots of fun! Great job to you and your friend.

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It looks great for your first obby :ok_hand:
Congrats to you and your friend.

In image 1 you could add curves on the bottom of the lava (Next to the Fastest Times board) and maybe volcanic ground (Like Rocks slightly covered in lava).

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Thank you! It is lots of fun, both to make and test! The feedback means a lot! :grinning:

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Thank you very much! I am glad to hear this! As a new obby developer, this inspires me quite a bit. Thank you for your suggestions, I will 100% consider adding those to the obby! It means a lot!

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i think it would look great if you add more decoration and for the others it looks nice

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I will definitely add that, thank you very much! As I said above, this is just starting; There will be much more decoration added soon, and hopefully it will begin looking much better aesthetically soon!