Hey this is my first devforum post and first build showcase, please put down some feedback and please give me some criticism as I need it to understand what I need to do better to become the best I can be at Building.
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It’s kinda repetitively colored. I think you should change colors a bit or materials. And possibly a bit less blocky?
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That looks nice! Coul use more details though.
This is a eh… Too many blocks, the pattern is too repetitive and it feels bland and boring. If I was to play a game with this map, I would not be interested.
Very nice build, but the biggest problem here is the colors. You’re using the same color for almost everything here. IMO the best way to get the same atmosphere you seem to be trying to get while changing the colors, you should try making every stand out feature a slightly different color than the color you’re using everywhere. For example, make the floor a slightly different color than the wall and the statue and stands another color that is slightly different from the wall.
Other than the coloring issues, it’s very good!
Thank’s for the feedback 
I’ll take into the account about the repetitiveness of the same color.
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Thank’s for the feedback I’ll take into the account about the repetitiveness of the same color. Ill also try that tip when doing another build.
I can see what your seeing i’ll try to change up the atmosphere and use fewer blocks.
Will take into account thank you.
It’s a very cute and simplistic build. But maybe you should try more shades of yellow. It gives the build a sense of depth. Also makes it look less like it is all blended together.
It looks very bland. Try adding materials or custom bricks also try to make everything the same color
I don’t understand what the map is mean’t to be? Is it mean’t to be a dessert place?