Feedback on a small clothing store that I made

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I just made this small clothing store and I would like feedback on it.

store shop clothing asd roblox
store shop clothing asd roblox1971Ă—741 890 KB
shop asdasjdajddwq idk what
shop asdasjdajddwq idk what1948Ă—717 1.22 MB

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I would recommend making the font of “Clothing!” a bit more noticeable, maybe make it bigger? Also I would detail the roof and floor more. If you are looking for a smoother lighting you could try making the roof not cast a shadow so you don’t have to worry about patches of light.

Also just a side note, if you are looking for a lot of detailed well thought feedback you should try to go more in depth on exactly what aspects you think could be better. Also some more screenshots of the inside and sides of the building would be nice! :+1:

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Can we see the inside of it?
From the outside I like it.Just make the roof a bit more texturised.

The roof is kinda basic and and some kind of plants(If you can)
Also Change the logo of your store. It’s kinda small at this distance.

Still i really like it.
Good Work Man!:+1:

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Thanks for the feedback! I’ll keep that in mind.

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I want to tell one more thing.

Put this post in the #help-and-feedback:cool-creations or #help-and-feedback:building-support.

Just telling you.

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How do I move this post? (sorry i am new to the devforum)

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You’ll see a pencil symbol at the top of the post
Click that. :+1:

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@fireman234550 if want to learn more about post sent a message to @discobot.
And reply @discobot start advanced and beginners tutorial.

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