Feedback on a Story Game!

Hi, so few days ago i’ve finished the first chapter of my game “The Appointed”
The game has 2 paths to end the game (you need to finish first path to unlock the second)

I need feedback on things that can be improved so that i can prepare myself for the next chapter. Thanks!

[Path 2] The Appointed (Yuda) - Roblox

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Hey, I just finished playing your game The Appointed. I found the game to be pretty intriguing, and I think it has lots of potential. I will say, at some points throughout the game I was clueless on what I was supposed to be doing and was wondering around aimlessly for most of the time. I also found myself having a hard time figuring out what specific door a keycard opened. I think having a clearer objective and a way to tell what door you’re supposed to open would be a step towards improvement, especially for impatient players with short attention spans. It just feels like the game isn’t engaging enough. There were also a lot of building errors, and I was able to see through some gaps in the wall, so I’d recommend patching those up as well.
I love the story so far and general concept, and it was really cool making the poison - good work on that sequence! I can’t wait to see where the journey takes us, this is a pretty good start :))

Thanks for your feedback! I’ll take notes of that and improve for my future games. Really glad you like it :))