Feedback on a teaser art?

Hello, I recently made a teaser for my game, could you rate it and tell me what I could do better?

Teaser Art

The best way I can improve is by comments, so feel free to do so! :smile:

I had to remove the rating system due to forum rules, please use the comments!

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I think the code that fade’s the picture is to much. I think you have to look a little to hard to understand what’s going on. Really good though!!

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It’s supposed to be like that!

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Way too much distortion effect, the text “Location: Unkown” doesn’t really fit but other then that it looks really great :D! Keep up the great work.

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The distortion is to make it look like it was leaked and still rendering

I recommend using those effects on the text too then, right now it looks out of place.

I think it looks good although I think there is a little too much distortion.

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Still a good teaser though! Very intriguing and makes me want to see more of it.

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Thank you for letting me know, I have removed the rating system to follow the ToS

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