I would like some feedback on an ad I made for a Disaster Survival game please!
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Looks old school, could use better images.
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Hey there.
This ad is really simple, nothing too special in it. Could put a bit more effort for someone to actually be interested and press on it, but that’s just my opinion.
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I think the presentation and the quality overall, isn’t the best.
You should try rendering some of it in blender, or hire someone. If you still wanted to use screenshots, I recommend putting a bit more effort into it by adding some detail. This will give you a chance to get some clicks.
But that’s just one way. If you wanted to keep the low quality, I recommend adding more humor into it to try to get the “Memer” Roblox audience to click on it.
Also, this hardly tells me what type of game this is. I saw the “survive” part. But that’s it. Survival games could be anything from “Piggy” By MiniToon to “Natural Disaster Survival” by Stickmasterluke.
Anyways, I wish you the best of luck with your ad, and I hope this was helpful!!