Feedback on Alien Cyborg Edit?

Help and Feedback Art Design Support
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This is the new Promotional Cover for my clothing collection EMULATOR, created by Fabscratty & I.
The Homestore and Showcase Movie will have a plot of Alien Takeover. I would love to hear your feedback on these two art pieces and if there is anything you would have liked to have seen executed differently.

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Here is an image of the Rig before editing:
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The make-up, hair, clothing, hand, and mechanical arm is drawn by me. My friend badrixcx has helped me out with some shading on the body; everything except for the background and graphic work is done by me.

This kind of style is unforeseen on Roblox, but it’s in my best intention to encourage artists to be creative and to diverse themselves from what is regularly advertised on the platform.

Thanks for your time!

Nilvou

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Greetings! :wave:

This looks amazing, I’ve never seen anything like it before on the platform.

As much as I love the effects you’ve added into your alien cyborg edits. I think you should lower the number of effects on your second edit, as some are unnecessary in my opinion.

Overall you did an excellent job, keep up the fantastic work! :smile:

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This is soo good! The details are just too good! It looks like theres alooot going on which makes it hard to see though lol

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Thank you guys for the feedback! For future edits, I will definitely give a shot at focusing on the subject and not so much of the background. @Scxipted @sikowwitzz

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