Hello,
after 60+ hours of scripting, building, animating I made an YT Intro for @IceTimeAdventures and I am looking for some feedback on it. 
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It looks really good! I would add some build up music before it blows out of the water and maybe make the camera movements less blocky.
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Thank you!
I wonder how should I do camera movements less blocky? 
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How are you recording it, are you animating all this, is this through a tweening script, etc?
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It is through a tweening script - I set up many parts
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im not sure, but i feel like its too long, judging by peoples attention spans, it will be skipped 90% of the times. that may not be good for watch time but, again, im not sure. I also agree with @JackyssWrld, music will help make it seem more fast paced and people might skip it less if the music choice is good
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I recommend using a plugin called Codes Otaku Cutscene. It makes projects like these very smooth. There are a couple YouTube tutorials on how to use it. Here is one for example: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GOcKj9cajf8&ab_channel=Disobeyedcrab
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This intro is very good! I like the style of it! It’s chill and relaxing.
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The effects and animation are pretty good but it’s way too long for a normal intro, for a good attention span, you should make the intro last a bit less. (<15 seconds in my opinion) Other than that, the camera and the player animation is a bit robotic but it’s fine.
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I have bad experiences with that so I always do my own, but thanks
Yeah, I am aware of that, I just got this idea and I liked so I made it…
It was my second time working with Moon Animator
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I like it, i would definitely spend on it much more time than you.
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maybe use moon animator because you could make things like these in 2 hours maybe
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Yeah, I used Moon Animator for second time and I had to work with 4 Rigs but thanks
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This into is good, but I feel like it will get skipped a lot juding by attention span of roblox players.
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Thank you, so I should make the intro faster?
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Thank you Tom, and thank you everyone for the feedback
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Probably, the intro is already good though.
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You are welcome! It was a joy to create this intro. 