I had shown what I had done earlier, but now I’m done with the build (not the functionality). I added some props outside, some NPCs to make it feel a bit more alive, Klein the guitar player, some lanterns, and added stuff on the inside. 95% complete (the build anyways)
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I really like the style of the armor shop, and I enjoy the tiny details with the props around the building.
My biggest concerns are mostly nitpicks.
I think you could improve the roof of the building by using a plugin like Gapfill or something similar and basically making the ends meet.
Another small thing that kind threw me off was how these lamps aren’t lined up. They aren’t the same height off the ground.
In the end, it’s a nice build! There’s a bit of polishing you could do in many areas, so just make sure you watch out for those small things. They definitely add up.
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Between the previous post you made about this and now, it looks way better with the lighting and model design, but what Titaneum talked about, the roof might need more of a improvement with the corners. It’s a great build, and I hope it goes well! 
It’s looks pretty neat since you’re still improving it, I would suggest you add more detail around the shop overall I do have a couple of suggestions.
The only thing I would improve and change is the sign is you could try removing the support beams and place the sign onto the building, or if that doesn’t work you could move the sign away from the building and place it on the side just like how (McDonald’s). Signs are and the text doesn’t quite fit you should try making it smaller in my opinion, and I don’t know if the door is in the building or if there isn’t one, you could possibly add one.
Some of the parts that are on your building like the “roof frame” aren’t connected you could try fixing that like what has been said above gapfill could really help.
I still think it’s not finished if so it looks nice, but it could still be improved.