[Feedback] on armour I've made

Took me like half an hour

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Looks really good but Id makes it more smooth and less edgy. Also, I’d make the straps wider and less thick. But good job so far can’t wait to see improvements

As tignif mentioned, the bevels are all super inconsistent on the model
the leather straps connecting to the body should be beveled to make it appear as if it is bending around the body, not a solid block that juts out.
The bevels on the side of the armor are too flat compared to the top and the bottom which make the armor look tacky due to how inconsistently smooth it is.

Don’t rush on your models so you can say I made this in X amount of minutes
take your time to look over every aspect of the armor to look for errors in continuity for style.

You should edit your post instead of this.

Looking good, try to make it fit around the face though. image

Can you perhaps explain (so that other users know what you built instead of guessing as that will just clutter the thread It’s not really a solution so it shouldn’t be marked).

As for my feedback I feel like the armour looks a little rushed if this were to be in game the person will get easily hurt however if it’s from a reference image can you perhaps include it inside your post so we know what you have done so far and the stuff you missed or did wrong? Overall I suggest you either add it on the shoulders so it could cover the other body area’s or try making the straps less blocky and long looking.

Maybe make the armour cover the back and more of the front something like that could work at the start it looks good but it’s a bit un detailed.