Feedback on artwork

alright so I have this unfinished art and i would like some feedback on it, obviously this isnt colored (im not planning to)

I returned from a 7 decade grave woooo

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Try to follow a tutorial first?
Maybe start with the basis before trying to implement creativity.

I would say redo the drawing since this looks like a journal drawing more than art. Examples can be the cluttered writing and the distorted facial parts. Maybe use a tutorial so you can get a better result?