Yo! I made a basic GFX in blender and added some simple effects in photoshop. If you could rate it and give some constructive criticism that would be very helpful. I’m always still trying to learn how to improve!
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Hi, i’m somewhat new to Devforum so my organization on criticism might be a little diffcult to understand.
Here goes,
The good thing:
You know what the chracthers are doing
Lighting and shadows are good
motion blur make it a bit more realistic
After shadow on person so the chracthers appear more realistic
The things which you could improve at:
A person with a gun doesn’t chase after a person, he just fires the gun
the background is a bit bland and would look intresting if there were maybe more people there as the setting looks like it’s a park.
We don’t know wether the guy running after the white default rig is the bad guy or the good guy, I’d say add a item or something to the white rig in order to make it seem more like he is running away with something. If it’s the white rig running because the behind him is a criminal, then i’d suggest having a ‘terrified’ expression on his face.
Thanks for reading 
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I really like it! this is def not basic, this is sick! I see a part where the tree is glitching out.
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Acually this looks really nce not gonna lie 
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