Hello, recently I have been building a small lobby type map for my game. The purpose of the map is just for the sights/views. In the real game this map will be used as an intermission map. These type maps will only appear for 25-45 seconds every so rounds and stuff. The players will be teleported to the map to just walk around and view the area. Any feedback on the map is wanted.
Your map, looks really good and incredible i like all the different detail you added all over the map area i think it looks amazing. However there is a couple of things to fix to improve it a lot more better. But i think you came up with a great design!
Cave Details
I see that your going for a snowy map. As it looks good however the cave part doesn’t seem to have no snow on the rocks and cave area! i would recommend you give the cave some snow on the rocks and wall part, to fit in with the whole the design your going for. And maybe add some icicles on the ceiling part! that will look great for your map and it will. Really improve a lot more if you adding details into the cave area!!
Map Area
The map seems really decent, overall you could add some snow on the wooden stairs part so it could look like it’s snowing all over the map. And i see you added little snow parts on the mountains you could maybe add some piles, of snow in the corners and some places, through the map that! will look good and some of the trees have block. Parts i would recommend you make the trees in the corner, the same as the others as well you. Add little snow parts on the walkway part.
Details
I would recommend, you add some snow on the statue or some texture. Instead of having it just grey that could be improve a little more and as i said above you could! add piles of snow, on the mountain area or on the statue itself. You could maybe add some little, rocks and change the snow color on the bushes to look the same on the map ground, overall you have done a great job on your map i would also give the mountains/rocks. Some snow as there seems to be none on them in the water as well…!
Keep up the good work, hope to see more of your work. Very soon and the final product of the map great job!
I could never build terrain with parts, this is really good man.
Only things I suggest are filling some of the dull areas that others have shown you and improve the lighting and try putting the fog further away.
