Hello, recently I have been building a small lobby type map for my game. The purpose of the map is just for the sights/views. In the real game this map will be used as an intermission map. These type maps will only appear for 25-45 seconds every so rounds and stuff. The players will be teleported to the map to just walk around and view the area. Any feedback on the map is wanted.
The game is located here:
[ MAP - Roblox ]
This looks good, but I think this belongs in the cool creations category? But yeah your build is great, I love the atmosphere of the space 
it gives off almost a space or laboratory vibe…correct me if I’m wrong 
Yes this is a perfect Map.
I suggest making this map inside a round too.(Sorry if you couldn’t understand)
You’ve got a nice concept there, but I’d like to challenge you to do this-look at every model and explain to yourself why it is placed there, and adjust if you can’t figure that out. Cords hanging from the ceiling can be a cool look, but what are they connected to, and why are they hanging instead of being in place? The cords in your build are randomly attached to the ceiling. You achieve a nice atmosphere but there is no story or life behind it without that purposeful thinking. This same process can be applied to the position of boxes and other assets.
I think it looks great, but you could add more detail to the things scattered across the lobby.
That looks amazing, you could make a good map maker for games. You should try and make maps for a few games that allow map submissions, I think you’d do great!
I like it, it’s nice and simple
It looks very high quality, Is this a lab kind of lobby?
Looks great and simple at same time!
Only thing that I dont like is the same material on every part of ceilings, floor and walls… maybe try to change it a bit and it can be better.
Lighting is nice! But sometimes its darker in center of rooms than in edges, i would maybe try to play with it a bit more!
Bulding is at end of the day great! Keep it up!
This has a nice style, I really enjoy the lighting in the place and the models seem very high-quality as others have said
However, what I’m guessing are supposed to be fans on the walls in the second and third picture sort of look like wagon wheels to me. Takes away from the sci-fi vibe imo, even if that’s not what they’re intended to be
Keep up the good work
Thank you all for the feedback. I will consider making changes! More ideas are wanted if anybody else would like to input as well.
It’s a decent map however most of the objects are quite the same color i assume it fits the lab sci-fi theme but i encourage you to use more colors to enhance the design a bit just to get a good feel of the map players will be in perhaps more props hanging on the walls vents, more wires, ceiling light and more.
What I mean is that the area feels nice and put together but since certain areas have less objects and colors you could try throwing more vibrant colors to bring the build out a bit.
I like the aesthetic and the general cartoony sort of style if that’s what your going for, one problem i have with your build is that the ceiling could use more as it seems a little less detailed than the rest of the build.
Other than those small changes could make the build stand out, I think it looks nice.
