Feedback on Celtic Sword?

I recently made this sword for a Viking-era game that I’m planning and I was hoping to get feedback! It is based off of this reference picture,

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I made it out of 3 separate mesh parts so I could use Roblox’s materials/colors instead of worrying about a texture, and to make it easy to recolor. The details on the handle, handle, and blade are all separate from eachother. The handle is Roblox’s “Wood” material, while the blade and handle-details are glass.

Sword

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Any constructive feedback will be appreciated!

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I suggest turning up the reflectance on the metal parts of the sword but other than that I don’t see how it could be improved, good job.

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Wow, this looks great. Really remarkable job, and I can only see one thing that looks slightly off.

The handle is where I would focus all my attention, as two parts of it seem to be improperly sized. I think it would look much closer to the real image if you were to slim down both of the horshoe shapes, with the one on the back being smaller entirely. It also seems to be missing a ring in between the smaller horseshoe on the end and the hilt. image

Other than that, it looks amazing. Congrats on your creation and I can’t wait to see what you do next!

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It looks outstanding. I would just increase reflectance and possibly add the line in the center of the sword.image

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