Feedback on clothing [Comedy based]

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Hello!

Currently I am making a FNAF fangame and I made clothing for the characters.

game: (NOT PUBLIC YET)

https://www.roblox.com/games/6349932370/Five-Nights-At-cool-boys-DEMO

Currently I am remaking and polishing some of the outfits.

I would like some feedback on this outfit:

https://www.roblox.com/catalog/6680016888/epic-boy
https://www.roblox.com/catalog/6680018890/epic-boy

Please tell me if there’s any problems like on the ends of a « face » if there’s any lines. If you know what I mean.

I will update this post when I upload more of the remakes.

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Maybe get a transparent face so it matches the grey part of the outfit. If it’s trying to be a bib, then make it look like one. Idk what you’re trying to make so this is all I can give to you

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I would also suggest this as it would make it look more in charter of what you are trying to make the clothing like, I don’t know if you did this already as its not ingame screen shots and I believe you might want to make the pants a darker blue to fit with the gray.

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