Feedback on Explosion

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#1

Hey, I’m looking for some feedback on this Explosion I’m working on.
I will say I am very new to VFX, but always looking to improve.
Please leave your comments and thoughts below, I’d love to hear what you think!
Thanks in advanced

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#2

Looks cool. There needs to be some left over smoke after the explosion.

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#3

Hey, I added some smoke after the explosion, check it out and let me


know what you think

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#4

Add a little bit more of the smoke, fire is a little too reddish

#5

Hey, I added some more Smoke, as well as turned the fire down a bit,
Let me know what you think

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#6

I can’t tell you what to improve on, its unique and BIG. I like it!

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#7

I dont like the textures your using, also try to add different textures for all of the particles?

#8

Hey, sure thing. Let me know what you think of this version:

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#9

I dont like the ray thingy. It looks too unnatural