Hello everyone!
I just published a showcase with some models I’ve been working on for the past couple of weeks.
I think it looks kind of bland, but I don’t know what to fix with it.
Check it out here :
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I like your models and the consistent color scheme so far! However, I suggest you lower the brightness of the sun a bit, create a more dynamic terrain (ie. hills and such) and maybe add some water here:
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Oops, I was just editing the terrain to make another section. I’m trying to make some metal parts in there, for a satellite crash.
That’d be even better 
GLHF!
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The white tree is a little weird along with the bunching of the rest in one area other than being spreazd more evenly out, I also think the ropes on the swing should look a little more like a rope or I suggest using the rope feature roblox provides so that it can move around. Other than that it’s just about adding smaller details like rocks, boulders, small plants, river, lake, different terrain, different shades of colours.
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This field honestly reminds me of autumn because of the colors you used, I also liked how the stone paths looked as well since it was very well detailed.
About the tree, I wouldn’t see using the color white would suit the autumn feeling this showcase is providing. I think that you should use simple brown color to match the other trees.
To stick with the title, I wouldn’t add too much human-made objects like a satellite, but instead add more nature-related things, like a pond that has many orange leaves floating in it. I honestly think that a showcase game should have a strict theme to it. If the environment is winter related, the audience will not expect to find “out of place” things like a UFO crash site for example (unless the entire showcase game is alien-related of course).
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This is a very nice showcase you have made! The meshes you made looks outstanding, and the view looks beautiful on a field. 
I would suggest or recommend adding flowers, bushes, rocks, plants, and mountains on the view. It would be very amazing to see what it would look like.
You did a good job here, and I hope you can finish it! 
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Hello there!
I think to make it less bland you could maybe make dens for prairie dogs or something along those lines.
Maybe some taller grasses as well would be nice. Also, are you going for the fall season here? It looks that way to me. Otherwise, I think it is an amazing build!
Edit: I meant to reply to the main build. Whoops.
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I really like it, personally, add some more landscape. Hills, tree’s of various sizes, water, rocks, maybe a village? Hope this helps.
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Very simplistic, and I love the blend of lowpoly trees with the roblox terrain as well as the lighting, everything blends. Reminds me of Vesteria a bit. Keep it up!
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Looks nice, but you should add a lot more trees around the area rather than just one spot, I get it’s a ‘lonely field’ but this will make it look a lot better. Also adding a better skybox will make the field look a lot better, maybe even a few particles around the map. You should also add quiet music, that’s peaceful and relaxing.
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It looks great. Color palette you applied is fantastic!
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