Feedback on finish for racing game

I am currently working on a Racing Game, sort of like mario kart. And I have finished what happens when you finish the court, and was wanting some feedback on how I can improve it. I am already not really that happy with the FINISHED! text, however am unsure on what to change it to.

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are you making it spin or is the script making it spin? other then that it looks ok wont say good lacks a few things.

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I will say that it is really good. What I think that you should add is the timer while the player is driving.

A script is making it spin, also so if you think it is lacking some things are you going to say what those things are?

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It is already there, top right below the lap counter. I am planning on making it clearer though and redoing the lap counter/adding more info on the gui while you are racing.

visual effects it lacks them particles and a bit of lighting as well as sounds and it spins too much and too fast.

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It’s good! For the finished text maybe try making the yellow text outline bigger. I would recommend instead of having the finished text background be these 2 squares with a cut one:
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Maybe try making it be just 2 squares like so:
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No offense of course. But something annoying, is the timer on the right. I feel like it is mostly cause of the 0 behind the time, it looks like it is just changing instantly. I suggest removing the 0, or making a time for the 0. Ik that this isn’t that relatable, but its just something that can easily be fixed. But I like the Finish already. But maybe a finish sound effect could be added.