If you made the text itself, it’s pretty good. One thing that’s pretty much disappointing me is that the background is a stock image from “123RF”. Might want to change that to fix your reputation a bit
Hey, you have made yourself some great art work right there. Though I have a minor recommendation that will make your work stand out even more, please do not use images and content that has external watermarking unless you added those watermarks yourself of course. Otherwise the work will appear less original.
It is understandable, but on google you are easily able to find wallpapers like that without any form of watermarking. I really recommend you do that other than use watermarked content, your design is nice, but the watermarking drags it down a bit.