Feedback On First Lightning GFX

Here is my FIRST lightning GFX. I want some constructive feedback.
I used Roblox studio, Blender, Photoshop, and Adobe After Effects.

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As your first time, I would say good job.

Some things to point out:

  • There is a rectangle overlaying the left arm in the right of image
  • The glow outline on the text does not match perfectly with the model

Well done on your first time! 6.5/10

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It’s great, I am just confused why the outline of the character goes off it a bit. But keep up the good work!

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It goes off because of a mistake I made in after effects. Thanks for the feedback.

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I am not sure what the purpose of using After Effects for since it is more of a motion graphics program. I agree with the statement that the outline should go around the character, but I would like to add that the character should be more in focus. Great for your first lightning gfx. Keep up the work.