Feedback on first logo for a friend

I need feedback on my first ever logo that I designed for my friend. Any suggestions or anything that I could improve on is greatly appreciated.

Edit: Fixed the logo.

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Looks great but the one bubble / particle effect looks out of place. Maybe consider adding more or none at all next time?

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That was a mistake. Fixing it right now.

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I think this looks pretty solid, I do think that the tones of greens are clashing in terms of the vibe this is probably meant to go off. Other than that, I really like the font you’re using :slight_smile:

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What does probably meant to go off mean? Sorry for not understanding.

I think my computer had a spasm- I didn’t type that LOL. It was meant to say meant to GIVE off LOL. oopsie O_O

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Looks amazing!

My only suggestion would be to experiment with some brighter shades of green and tan! – I just personally find it a bit too dark at the moment for a simulator!

Hope this helps! :heart:

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Thanks! I’m pretty sure more vibrant and brighter colors attract the eye more. Brightening it up like you said wouldn’t be a bad idea :slight_smile:

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I think that’s a really nice logo! But with a little bit of fixing up could make it look much better…
1- The colors are looking like a swamp (I don’t mean to be rude just making a comparison) Maybe using more vibrant colors most likely would attract more attention.
2- The font is pretty basic. I would suggest hand-making your own letters.
3- Last Adding effects like glows always makes the logo better!
Here’s an example of what it could be I made really quickly:


Edit: If you want to you can use it, took me like 5 minutes :smiley:

Dang. That’s pretty good. I appreciate you writing out all of this. And quick question how do I make my own letters?

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Nah dude that’s your work and you deserve to keep it. Thanks for the offer but I want to improve at my logo making skills.:grinning:

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Basically make your own font. You would have to get the basic idea of the game you’re making the logo for. You would then have to match your letters to the style of the game. For example if the game is about disappearing everytime a player clicks a button, then make the the text fade away or make it thanos disappear(the little particles fading away). It will always look better because it’s not one of those fonts everyone uses.
By the way no problem :slight_smile:

I’ll test it. It seems complicated though. I’ll bet I’ll learn more along the way and it will become easier down the road. Man, I’ve seen your portfolio before and I’ve got to say that you’re incredible at what you do. From making icons to logos you are excellent. Thank you.

Edit: You’re a huge inspiration.

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It will definetly be a little bit complicated but I believe that is all part of it all. It will for sure be worth it. And all you have to do is believe in yourself and I promise the more you work on your skills and the more you try to do better and try out new things, the better you will get and the easier it will be! Thank you, I appreciate that you are inspired by my work, makes me happy that I could help someone :slight_smile:
Good luck dude!

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Thanks a lot, you don’t know how much this means to me. If I become as successful developer, I’m giving credit to everyone that has supported me throughout the way. Especially you. Good luck to you too. :grinning:

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