Feedback on First Showcase (WIP)

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Hello,
My name is solastaaa, and I recently began building in Roblox Studio. I would like some feedback on my first showcase! The general building stuff is about 90% done, and I would like to get some tips before I add finishing touches and move on to decoration. Here’s the link:

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Very cool showcase! It looks amazing!

I found 4 problems though:

Problem 1

I don’t believe this is a problem, but this might be. Boundary break:

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Problem 2

A such broken StarterCharacter:
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Problem 3

You can try fixing the zoom a bit. At the spawn I can see “out of bounds”:

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Problem 4

At a certain point around here, I can go in the water. I believe you don’t want this, and if I manage to get into the water, I can fall off the map:
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I had a bunch of StarterCharacters for scaling purposes, they will be removed when I’m finished building. I’ll be sure to fix the other problems, though. Thank you!

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Be sure to post screenshots instead/too, so people will be a lot more willing to share their feedback next time!