Feedback on first thumbnail + Icon

Pretty much the title.

I like them both, maybe you could use a bit more contrast on the second one’s text, could add a shadow or something or a thicker text stroke.
The first one is good - I can’t make out at all what’s in the background though (but, I don’t really need to). Maybe you should make the main bit bigger so there’s a bit less unused space. Consider your icon is going to be fairly small on someone’s phone screen!

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The icon is too basic and does not convey what your game offers. The thumbnail is well made. Improve your icon because that is most important as it’s a player’s first point of visual.

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Hi
I like the thumbnail but both lack description I have no idea what the game is about

A game icon should do either 2 things:

Be a mystery making the player want to find out what the game is

Or show what the game actually is about

The game icon tells me nothing about the game at all.

I like the actual design but it tells me nothing BTI tells me nothing and just a basic character gives me 0 information

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I don’t like “BTI”, full name may look better I guess

Thumbnail is alright, looks good

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Appreciate the feedback, and I agree and this was my thought for the icon, but I could not figure out a solution. In my eyes seeing that icon with the name of the game (Build to Impress) would put something in their head. Any ideas on how I could convey building through the icon design I have?

You could use a blueprint and a hammer and maybe the character could be a builder instead or something

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This icon and thumbnail look great! Nice job on it! I rate them both 10/10! They look cool and good! How long did it take to make both of them?