Feedback on Game Artwork

hI!
i am nt really good with GFX/ art work, but today I was bored so I decided to make one!

please do leave feedback as I’m looking to improve!
thanks!

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GFX is 3D graphics. But for this design I’d recommend you to fill empty space and make background with more suitable colors. Goodluck!

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thanks! edited it. since im not into this stuff i got it wrong. thanks for the feedback!

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Redid it with your suggestion. Looks nice!

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Less is more.

Try not to overdo it with a lot of text.
A lot of users dont like to look for text.

Use more background/pictures and less text is my advise.

Also… 0%sale… so there is no sale?

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Yeah, thought that was funny. Kinda works with the theme of the cafe.

I like that kind of humor.
Maybe focus more on those jokes.
It was not completly clear for me.

Shipment 100 days.
No return.
Not happy… not our problem.
Best coffee in town. ~ no one
Buy 3 pay for 4
Long waitinglines

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Wow what program you use? Just curious.

so, i need 300(withnoextra0) characters?

Very good, but i would change the background whit an image of the cafe

To much text . Can’t concentrate on one thing . LESS IS MORE .

Maybe try to find a more proper picture (e.g. search on google in the format of transparent png) So you don’t need to erase the background and it will look neater.

GFX actually just stands for graphics effects lol

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It seems ok, but way to overcrowded! I would remove the doughnut, and the coffee also. I like to keep my GFXs simple, sweet, and give a good message. For example here is a logo I made for my group just recently:


I love the fonts though. Also I think company is spelled wrong, but maybe that was intended. I think this artwork has a lot of potential though! Great work!

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