Hi, this is a thumbnail I made for my new game “Tropical Paradise”. Any feedback would be appreciated! 
btw this is my first post on the dev forum 
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I think it is a bit too bright, other than that it is fairly decent :D.
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For me, it is extremely bright and hurts the eyes. I suggest turning down the brightness and find a better font that really pops out. Other than, it is a decent logo.
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Ok I agree, I’ll go and change that now
Yeah I agree with @Bli_Pan and @RBLXpsyfor it is too bright and maybe add some more things in the background. Other than that, it looks great!!!
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Well,It looks amazing!
As @RBLXpsyfor said; it is so bright and it hurts my eyes.
In rest is perfect!
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Way to bright, also a little to pixely. Might want to show the character’s bodies under the water to. Other than that it looks amazing!
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Ok thank you for your feedback!
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You should remove the bloom effect and get rid of that empty space above the text.
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i understand that its supposed to be a sunny day but its too bright or over contrased
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It is way too bright 
But other than its really friendly and nice, would maybe decorate background a bit like photoshop in a background but really cool!
Bravo 
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I would definitely go with blender render and a different font, and it looks pixelated.
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In my honest opinion, I think its decent. Too bright in my opinion.
It looks great, but it is very bright, and adding more detail in the back would help, like trees.
Way too bright, but from what I can see you definitely need to work on the shading of the players. Another thing you need to work on is the font type you’re using, I’d experiment around with different fonts to see what fits best, the current one doesn’t look that great.
Really bright, and work on the on the players seen in the thumbnail.
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