Feedback on GFX for Absorbedtomguy

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Hey guys!

Recently, I created some GFX for @Absorbedtomguy because I was playing Roblox with him on this cool marble game thing that I really enjoyed and I would like to hear your thoughts on the GFX I made for him. This was my first time using the Robloxian 2.0 rig! I think this is my best GFX!

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I love this piece It looks very good,good job :+1:

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Thank you so much! I greatly appreciate your feedback.

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I’d make the background a slightly different colour to his shirt. Otherwise, very good job.

Is it supposed to be for the marble game, or is it just of his character?

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Oh just of his character, thank you for the feedback, I appreciate it!

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Personally, the Robloxian 2.0 bundle is my favorite. I love the background and effects of the GFX. The pose is decent, but the position of that hand pointing up just seems a bit off to me. Other than that, great work! Looking forward to more GFX designs from you. :happy2:

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Thank you! I do agree the posing of one of the hands looked a little wierd. I used @i5k’s GFX pack for the effects, it is great!

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Hello brother developer!
I must admit that you have a talent for this, the only thing that failed you was having a little more logic in your paintings and more range of colors that combine. Take a look at this:

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  • The character’s left arm is bent in a strange way. (I hope the arm is not broken)

  • How is it possible that a jacket can have two pairs of threads …? Unless you have two jackets on.

  • The logo on the jacket is a bit pixelated, seriously corrupting the strength and energy your GFX expresses.

  • I love the color blue, it is one of my favorites, but in your GFX you go a bit too far … Try to find another range of colors that can match your character and that looks even cooler.

I recognize your effort when making this GFX, because I know that doing them is not easy, just fix these details and you will see how your GFX becomes a true masterpiece.
Don’t give up, developer brother, you are very talented. :upside_down_face:

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Good point actually, his character was just like that :joy:

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LOL. Jajaja 30 caracteressssssssss

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Great job! Keep up the good work, I cant wait to see your other projects :smile:

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