Hey! Once again, I would like some feedback on my previous render. I improved it a ton.
(I’m working on composition so it’s not the best)
BEFORE IMPROVEMENTS
AFTER IMPROVEMENTS
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Very very good, my friend 
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The improved version of this GFX is epic. However, I have to tell some things:
- Adding a watermark at the center is not recommended. You make people focus on who did it rather than what is the GFX about.
- Add some sea. As I understood, this is a fishing game. I don’t sea any water.
So, I’m just recommend you to add a sea and to change the position of the game name and of the watermark. I suggest you to make your watermark smaller and put it at an upper corner.
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I think it is just to prevent from copying.
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Yeah, but putting it at the center just destroys the whole GFX. I do not suggest its deletion, I just suggest to move it in a corner.
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By “copying” I believe he meant as in copying when it isn’t published yet. I see a lot of people do this when they are making GFX, they put a giant watermark in the logo, then when it is paid for and everything, they put the watermark in the bottom right.
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I agree with you that’s what he Need to do if he didn’t then people will definitely steal it
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I really like the fact that you have rendered the image from a closer perspective, I also like the fact that you have rendered the image from a different angle and a ‘foggy’ effect to the graphics design. A few of my suggestions would be…
- Try to reduce the ‘foggy’ effect
- Could replace the grass in the background with water
- Could add a bit more detail to the clothes, perhaps more folds
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Meanwhile the old one looks more saturated I think for the better design you could make the letters look more glass material like rather than having whole screen faint white
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That’s so no one steals it lmaoooo.
I think the folds look perfect.
It’s not a game and it was just for fun, also it’s for my uncle that passed away with cancer. He used to go to little lagoons and fish for crabs there. If you look at the gfx you’ll see water.
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Looks really nice, well done! 
Good GFX! The lighting really pulls it all together. One thing I suggest to fix is that to make the character look a little more realistic, like holding one of the rocks with his hand. Besides that, well done!
Sorry for your loss, but this looks great!
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This GFX is really amazing, how long has this taken you?
About 1 hour? Maybe a bit more…
I couldn’t agree more. Based off what information we’ve been given, I think it’s quite obvious it’s a fishing game. I don’t see how this could be related to fishing when there’s no water in the scene.