Hello!
I would like some criticism on these few gfx’s I’ve made over the past few days.
Feel free to ask any questions!
Also don’t be shy to tell me your favorite!
I was also experimenting with some watermarks btw.
Thank You
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They look great! One thing I’ll say is that the lighting looks a bit dim on some of the characters. You can see this really clearly on the first one. I’d suggest using HDRIs if you aren’t already. Also maybe add some sort of background on these. Other than that, they are great concepts!
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Yes I Wasnt Really Going For A Gfx With A Background It Was More Of A Simple Gfx. And Yes I Already Use A Hdri thx!
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It looks like each of those people are stuck in their own customized spring. Add some effects and some motion capture in it. That will make it better
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The characters look very dull, give them more dynamics. Also, the coil of light is just kind of there, the characters don’t interact with it.
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I’m Not Really Sure What You Mean By Motion Capture And The Purpose Was For It To Be With No Effects/clean
There very creative. The only issue I see is the 3rd one, the lighting is quite dull if you get what I mean. The background could be changed. Their just something about it that just isn’t quite right . Other than that man, you did a great job.
Archie4lifeyodude
(I use my alt for dev forums)
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I like it a LOT. It’s really good, hope you get some commissions!
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Thanks I Am Starting To Commission Them Soon! I Am Just Setting Up My Portfolio Which Will Be Ready In The Next Day