Feedback on GFX

Hi, I just made a new GFX for my game, I havent made a GFX in a long time so it might look a bit not so good.

Edited it a bit, should be better to see now, still not perfect but I am trying to improve!

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Im confused, all I see is lines

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It’s just black with a slightly less dark pentagon?

Yea, I just realized I made the background a bit dark and the ‘vent’ is a bit light, but when I edited it look different :sweat_smile:

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Yea, when I edited it you could see it better, I am making it better now :sweat_smile:

All i see is 2 dots, is this intended?
image

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This should be kind of a head, like a person watching you, but with red eyes. :sweat_smile:

It looks different as it normaly is, because makes the quality lower so it may look a bit akward.

basically its two red dots and black lines 1/10

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Hmmm

I like it alot. The red squares gives off good vibes.

I would recommend Blue dots though.

That was a joke. In all seriousness I cant see it.

It’s a GFX background correct?

Here’s an idea:
since you mentioned that

This should be kind of a head, like a person watching you, but with red eyes. :sweat_smile:

You should add an NPC looking scared like it has a feeling that something is watching them which is the background you’re showing.

Since it doesn’t seem to have any details at all right now.

Overall, keep practicing and keep working on it! :slight_smile:

I don’t think two red dots is a GFX…

Yea, but my blender crashed right as I wanted to do that, but I am pretty tired now so I’ll guess I’ll do it another time.

Actually this should be a person behind a corner, but its too dark to see, and I can’t really change it, because it would look weird if its brighter, so I just keep it that way

This is probably one of the best pieces I’ve seen in a while. The dark lines, the emphasis on the red dots. This is beauty.

The way the red dots are just barely visible shows how intricate this art work is.

I just LOVE the way you used all of the canvas to express your feelings and views on society as a whole.

The way this GFX makes me feel is not possible to put into words.

You make me want to work harder, soon (hopefully) I will reach your level of expertise.

Keep posting more of this amazing content.

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No reason the criticize him bud, I’ve seen worse get uploaded to the fourms. Maybe read his previous posts before you waste your time giving a fake review again k?

But in all seriousness yes the gfx is pretty bad due to me not being able to see anything, But he did say his quality went down after the download, who knows…It may have ended up better if that didn’t happen.

I can’t see anything :confused: It’s too dark.

Well, thanks for the very good review!

But actually no need to send some fake reviews, I tried making it as bright as possible so people could see something, but the download and the upload to the devforum made it darker so you cant really see anything, also since its so dark now, you cant really see the things i put on there, so please read my posts before answering.

I know, I tried making it bright but if its brighter it would have looked bad and since the download and the upload to the dev forum changed the brightness somehow you cant see anything.

I feel like it’s too dark, like where I can barely see the closet/vent (not sure), but if that’s the vibe your going for than it looks neat! :+1: