Hello! I’m Dog, a beginner to moderate scripter and a beginner GFX artist. I would like some feedback on my third gfx, on what to fix, what to do next time, ect.
GFX :
edit : changed limb rotations to look better
edit : changed limb rotations to look better
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I like the style you are going for, the left arm is breaking since the rotation is wrong. The text font is pretty bland and doesn’t have variation from other games on Roblox, as Adopt Me’s font is to Vesteria’s font. They are completely different. The shading needs some work too, the backdrop being more of a sunset doesn’t go with the lighting since the lighting makes it look like day, add a sort of red tint in the lighting and add more make the sun come from a different angle to match where it would be in the backdrop to add a few more shadows and make it look more realistic. Overall not the best but pretty good for a third GFX.
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The font is just for a watermark, and yea the I need to work on the lighting and arm rotations. As I write this I now notice the front figure is more shiny and smooth for some reason. I will take these all into advice for later. Thanks!
its good, but add more atmosphere to it, the sky needs to look better (it looks weird rn), and you need better lighting and more edits
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The noobs edges seem a bit “Roundy” in my perspective. Shadowing is ok but could use Work. Maybe make the Noob in the back Face the Noob in the Front more because it looks like he’s looking down at the floor. Hope this helps!
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The background is a bit bland and I don’t even know what’s going on in the background. Hope it helps.
The characters seems pretty dead, it will be better if you reanimate them, and the watermark needs reproving, otherwise it’s pretty good!
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