Feedback on GFX

Looking for feedback on my latest GFX!

This is my first time doing a backround by the way.

Tell me what you think!

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I like it except for the sun in the background that messes with it.

Ok I like the overall GFX that you’ve made, congrats it looks nice!

But I have three issues in it:-

1)The Sun: as what @SpyMazeInc have said, the sun looks like as if its has a line pattern, I can see that you’re trying to make it as if its a sunset looking, try improving that
2) Watermark: The watermark really distracts pretty much the entire photo of the GFX, so try to either reduce the amount of watermarks on the GFX or make a small known watermark at a corner of the GFX.
3)The face and posture: Ngl, the face gives me cringe vibes when I looked at the face at the GFX, its just doesn’t look right. Like think about it, Smile + Sunset, hmm.

About the posture though, doesnt look right. Change its posing position into as if he relaxing with both of his arms crossed behind his head, tilted to a tree, and the right leg is placed cross-over on his left leg.

Like this guy right here:-

For this I suggest that you’d change the face into some face that gives relaxing + excitement type of faces, also how about adding some dark shades onto the face of your rig in it. Also, I don’t think that I see any ocean at the beachside, and finally you kinda lack of detail of the place he’s sitting on. How about a picnic area with a basket with some food and drinks laid on a picnic mat.

Something like this:-

picnic