One of my advertisements in a while, and I’d like some feedback, please.
Thanks!
Its just words so it doesnt look appealing
Maybe make some kind of visual
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I don’t think it will attract a lot of people as its just an black background.
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I don’t think many people will read all that, I recommend adding in some appealing visuals
Ill be honest, not appealing. Also not in the skyscraper template.
Definitely needs a simple but not too complicated background.
I know you want to show off all the features but I think less words and something more eye catching. I like how there is a mix of colours. Background could definitely help.