Feedback on hand drawn ad

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Hi! it’s Leeuhnii :ice_cube:

During my comm break… I made an ad! I based it off of all the SCP ads I’ve seen

It’s not completely complete as you can see from the character at the bottom but if you want a general gist of what they may look like check out chibi (basic)! Just… scared lol

Questions!

  • Would you click this if it were an ad? (if it were to be polished and have text)
  • Should I add this to my portfolio?
  • What should I do to make it more appealing?
  • General feedback! How can I improve this?

If this does gain interest I’ll make another ad with a different theme

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updated ver. ( from joelOVIP1’s advice :] )

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It’s REALLY really good, just would advise on a more balanced warmth to the color, that’s just an opinion.

It’s really awesome!

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Thanks! I’m of adding some sort of flashlight lighting near the bottom from the character to add to it :]

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HOW DID YOU HAND DRAW THAT THAT IS AWESOME!!!

  • honest that is one of the best hand drawn things i’ve seen!
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Yes good idea, that will really add to the scene. :slight_smile:

You’re very very god damn talented.

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Hey ey how did you draw the ad with hands?! Its really good! It looks like printed!

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Still looking for some questions to be answered or any more general feedback :]

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I could never do what you do like what you created is amazing! I am very amazed on how many creative people do this kind of amazing work and the people that can come up with creative ideas. I love what you created and I hope you create more and more amazing masterpieces just like this one!

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