Feedback on hotdog stand!

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I’m making an outdoor park/square map for my game, and I decided that I needed a little décor.
So I made a hot dog stand! :stuck_out_tongue: Feedback, please?

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It’s very basic, are the cylinders at the bottom of the cart supposed to be wheels?

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Yes, the style is supposed to be basic, and the wheels aren’t really seen.

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I suggest making them more like wheels, even the littlest details could make a build look better.

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A few critiques, I agree make the wheels more like wheels and more prominent. Also add some rotation to the top cover. And just a tip: scale down your move under snap to grid for more precise building. :slight_smile:

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I would add more dimension to it, it looks very blocky!

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Consider making the cart a rounded part.

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I did that, my usual is 0.5, but I sometimes scale it.

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I went for the simplistic style, to just give it a nice vibe.

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How would I do that? I’m fairly new to building, does it include unions?

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I think it looks pretty good as you can see by his title he is programmer so he is not that big of a builder.

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